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I've rewritten Chapter 9. I'm still not all that happy with it, but I think I need to just move on to Chapter 10 at this point. The problem is, most of the chapter is Meredith and co sitting around a conference table. I can't work out any way to do what needs to be done in this chapter without using this basic structure. The next chapter isn't a whole lot better, but it does end with a bit of action, and the chapter after that is almost all action, so maybe it will work out in context. At least, I hope so.